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A sticky Surprise by solidzesnake A sticky Surprise by solidzesnake
:iconlady-of-mud: dressed as Yoko, and one of my favorite oc's by a good friend :iconicmyaieye: Mina dressed as a doll, find themselves in a very sticky situation with the danger room, once again plagued by the Nintendo menace. With the muffled cries for help, the sweet and lovable OC's Amy wonders too far only to find herself hopelessly entangled in the spider's sticky trap as it webs off the entrence in an effort to make sure no other uninvited guests try to enterupt her dinner.

The 3rd pic in my Halloween pic series, I hope you all enjoy and like the new way of cocooning^^
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:icontheladyj:
It's very colorful and eye catching. But I feel as if with your last few pieces, you've been over-relied on busy lines and filler backgrounds, rather than creating a -good-, correct base sketch. you need to build solid anatomy fundamentals. The finished quality of your work is dumbed down by poor body mechanics.


Multiple subjects is always hard to balance and their placement is good. But so much of their anatomy is wrong, it's very distracting. Foremost, the girl in pigtails, her arms are too long. If you straightened her out, they'd literally would be knee length, gorilla style. You have this love of hyper-extending upperarms and forearms. Elbows go to the nipple, finger tips go just below the hip line. And then you stump her legs, cramming her shins into the frame.


The girl in the center, her legs are a bit off, but DAMN the boobs. I know you and boobs, so good job. Her anatomy is the least incorrect, but still not right.


The doll-girl in the corner, Her torso is good, but her legs are completely nonsensical. I don't care if she's a tree of a woman, Her thighs and her calves are complete fiction. They are too long, as if she's been stretched out to hide her feet behind the second ones head. There's no surrealism is not the point of this picture, yet you've poorly wonked nearly all the anatomy.


Go back to basics and practice. Pictures like these, and in Livestreams, people get so excited to be involved, they don't correct you. They don't say, "that arm is too long, those legs are too long." And only you and your reputation suffer for it.


I'm gettiing less tolerant to your second-rate anatomy.
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Spartandude17 Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012
Awesome work
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:iconsolidzesnake:
solidzesnake Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks
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:iconspartandude17:
Spartandude17 Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2012
your welcome
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:iconlustyvampire:
lustyvampire Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012
I really like this, and also the first thing i noticed the spiders markings are like cute litte eyes :)
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:iconsolidzesnake:
solidzesnake Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol thanks, the spider is actually a skultula from the legend of zelda, keeping with the Nintendo Peril theme
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:iconlustyvampire:
lustyvampire Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012
ooh really :) i love that game, your work is awsome :)
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:iconsolidzesnake:
solidzesnake Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
awww you are too kind
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:iconlustyvampire:
lustyvampire Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012
Your welcome :) Wish i could draw webs like yours :)
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:iconsolidzesnake:
solidzesnake Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
thanks, it just takes time and practice really
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:iconlustyvampire:
lustyvampire Featured By Owner Oct 19, 2012
You think,i will have to give it a try im actually writing a story about a group of teenagers who get trapped in a candy factory with variours sweet traps :)
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